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eve_primeG. wants me to write even more. My prelim paper's readability is suffering because I don't have enough summarizing paragraphs. He says, "It's a fantastic piece of work in many respects, but I'd like it to 'get across' better." That's nice to hear! I think I want to wait 'til tomorrow to plunge back into the beast, though.
Update 8:23 a.m.: I've thought all night about the mixed metaphor in that last sentence and have concluded that I really don't mind it.
Update 8:23 a.m.: I've thought all night about the mixed metaphor in that last sentence and have concluded that I really don't mind it.